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    I was happy to find some Juvenile S Phoebe that were quite cooperative at letting me get close to them.
    Really not much of a perch but some dry brush in a field but I do like the similiar colors in the bg.

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    Lovely gentle image, Jim. I really like the complementary colours of bird and BG. I might trim a little from the right to movere the birds head from the vertical centreline. Well done.
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    Sharpness, BG, head angle and composition look very good, just the blacks of the tail are blocked.

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    very beautiful James, love the BG, perch and details
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    Light, pose, perch, BG, colores, detail and sepcies.. all is A+ to me. I would try a different crop, maybe a little less room from the top and from the right. Congratulations!

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    So nice and elegant! Maybe just open up the dark tail.

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    That clean OOF BG rocks. I also like the pose and sharp detail. Lovely image James.

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    great looking bird this Bhai.. loved the sharpness the pose, BG.. all good..

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    I love the complimentary bg James. Excellent execution. I think I agree with the cropping suggestion to get it a bit off-center.

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    Neat monochromatic palette with good composition, clean BG, head angle and EXP control. Nice perch too!

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    James, agree with everything said. loved the neatness of the image a lot. This will make any field guide proud. Thx for sharing.

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