HI, Here is one that happened to fly by me when I was holding a camera! - I am not crazy about some of the shadows..however kind of like the image...comments? Michael Stern
I'll echo Fabs' comments. I like the overall pose but the whole bird looks soft on my monitor. I slight head turn towards the lens would have helped but you did well to try and capture some quick action.
Focus seems to have been on the far wing. Unfortunately I don't think the OOF head can be 100% salvageable as it is too soft. The open bill adds some interest, and the downward pointing wings with spread primaries look cool!