Results 1 to 6 of 6

Thread: Rose after the storm

  1. #1
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Location
    Millington Md.
    Posts
    2,513
    Threads
    365
    Thank You Posts

    Default Rose after the storm

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    Nikon D-300
    1/50 sec at f18
    tripod
    180mm Tamron Macro
    ISO 800
    Overcast light
    Would really appreciate help with composition, sharpness? saturation? anything else?

  2. #2
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    Solothurn-Switzerland
    Posts
    1,658
    Threads
    127
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Beautiful !
    Liked the drops on the spiraling petals. The saturation seems fine but might run some noise reduction on the image though.

  3. #3
    Julie Kenward
    Guest

    Default

    I agree with Kaushik...I do see some noise issues. I like the level of saturation very much and also how the top drops are so crisp while the others fall away as you progress down the spiral; however, you've missed the very center of the rose and that's really too bad - that would have put it over the top for me. This is a tough angle to get it all just right but I'd rather see it pinpoint at the center and losing focus as you go out. Really nice try, though!

  4. #4
    Roman Kurywczak
    Guest

    Default

    Hey Bob,
    Great Suggestions above. The are tougher than they look!!! Deciding where to crop in camera because of the leaf swirls makes composing challenging! I agree with Jules on the focal point too but at this close working distance....even a slight change in angle can make a huge difference! Colors look excellent on my monitor too!

  5. #5
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    West Nottingham, PA, USA
    Posts
    7,038
    Threads
    427
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Nice color and water drops. I keep wanting the center of the flower to be in focus. I like the composition you chose. Looking forward to seeing more.

  6. #6
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Dec 2009
    Location
    Mifflin, TN
    Posts
    2,799
    Threads
    379
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    I agree with what's already been said so I have nothing to add.

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics