Out of the Box IOTW 6/4/10 William Maroldo

[Alfred Forns]

Congratulations William Maroldo
Scene 1 Revised


Hi! I posted this image with my last post, and it occurred to me I ought to start an new thread , since it might be overlooked. Appreciate the feedback!!
The consensus seemed to involve the night-herons eviction. I played with the idea, and it didn't work. Just a useless space. Anyway, Arthur also thought the clipping was a problem as well. In this version the night-heron was placed in front of the frame and a shadow added in PS. It seems, to me at least, it adds another dimension, and the eye and bill leads into the image (hopefully solving another problem pointed out by Kerry).
comments and critique welcomed. regards~Bill

[Hilary Hann]

Congratulations William, this is truly OOTB. Well thought out and produced.

[Axel Hildebrandt]

Congratulations, William!

[Nick Palmieri]

Well deserved, congrats!

[denise ippolito]

Congratulations, Bill, Well deserved and an interesting piece of art.:)

[Harshad Barve]

Congratulations William

[Adrian David]

Congratulations!

[Lance Peters]

Congrats Bill!!

[Doug Brown]

Way cool William! Congrats!

[Jackie Schuknecht]

Congratulations Bill, you are doing some wonderful work.

[Nate Chappell]

Congrats William, very cool!