Hi Roy - looking a lot better - some of the whites are looking a little on the hot side. Might also consider cropping a little from the top and the LHS - Do like the space for him to look into - just dont know if quite as much is needed.
Nice details in the blacks.
Looking forward to seeing more :)
Hi Roy, Very good advice by Lance. Agree on the crop on top and LHS.IMO the LHS could be cropped by a third and still look fine. A bit over on the whites but good detail elsewhere.
A better example than the OP..