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    Hartlaub's Gull. This was taken in a lagoon just outside of Cape Town, South Afica. When the weather is calm, the water is like glass, as can be seen in the image. This was created from a pier, thus not getting down to eye level. I managed to capture the reflection on landing. Because of the perfect symmetry, I left some space at the bottom, so as not to have the subject too central.

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    I really like the reflection and the wing position!

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    Apart from everything else, I think that the water splash is what makes this for me.

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    Welcome Stuart.....

    lovely image....because of the symmetry with reflection....i might crop bottom of image ..same distance as the top....

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    Very nice. I like the timing on the splash and the reflection is just awesome. I think the semmetry here would allow for a centered composition if you wanted one, but I like it as is just as well.

    I do wish the that head didn't merge with the tail and appeared more like in the reflection. The impossible-for-this-image lower angle would have fixed that.

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    The splash makes this one for me. Very nice!

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    I like it as noted above but wish that the bird's head were dead straight ahead...

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    I like it Stuart

    Would go a little brighter and crop from bottom Take advantage of the symmetry and go square !!!

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    As mentioned the symmetry is fantastic. I agree with the square crop.

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    Like it very much, Stuart.

    I would go for an alternative crop to those suggested so far and bring in the sides for a vertical crop. That would, for me, really emphasize the X shape. Maybe a teeny clockwise twist, too.

    Please don't lighten it: Stuart you know this gull has a grey head in life!
    Last edited by john jackson; 03-05-2008 at 05:58 AM. Reason: added lighten comment

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    Thank you all so much for the positive crits and comments. Much appreciated.

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