Lark Scape

[Harshad Barve]

Dear all

Made this is in Nannaj , one dantastic place for grassland birds
D300, 600mm, ISO 200 , F5.6 , 1/1250 , beanbag
All C & C are most welcome and much appreciated
Harshad

[Troy Lim]

Harshad,

I feel there is too much space on the right, plus the OOF leave is overpowering the subject.
How big exactly is this little bird?

[Harshad Barve]

Harshad,

How big exactly is this little bird?

14 Cm

[Troy Lim]

14 Cm

That is tiny...

[Fabs Forns]

I like the BG very much but I feel there's bit too much of it, Maybe cropping some off the right.
Good EXP and pose, the weed touching the bird is distracting,
Thanks for sharing, Harshad.

[arash_hazeghi]

Agree with comments above too much empty space and would clone the weed behind the bird, very nice otherwise. TFS

[Hilary Hann]

It is a very beautiful background, but a little less would still be beautiful. Agree about removing the oof grass. I like the way the little bird is perched on the edge of the rock.

[denise ippolito]

Harshad, I don't mind the extra space. I feel it adds to the sense of scale. But you could easily take a small amount off the right side. The grass behind the bird I would evict if it were mine. I love the colors in the BG and the way the bird is standing on the rock.

[Randy Stout]

Harshad:

Good discussion above. I agree about a little too much space. I like the sense of scale and possibilities, but a little less free space please. Agree about removing the touching grass.

Might consider running NR on the BG as there is some noise creeping into the darker areas.
Could clean up the whitewash on the rock also.

Cheers

Randy

[Harshad Barve]

here is repost with little less space , let me know how it looks now , BTW big NO from me for clone so grass and white wash stays

[Stu Bowie]

Harshadbhai, the repost looks good with lesser space on the RHS. Perfect pose from the the little guy, and I like the clours in the BG.