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Thread: Common Whitethroated - Sylvia communis

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    Joel Brueziere
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    Default Common Whitethroated - Sylvia communis



    this male singer video:
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RbprJxZmmbc

    Picture: Canon 30D 300F4 iso 200
    Video : Panasonic TM60

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    Hi, Joel! I do wish for a better head angle here, some more sharpness, and a more natural perch. Posting the rest of the exif could help us give you a better critique. Also, a tighter crop might work better, and the rail makes the current crop look crooked.

    The background is very nice, and I do like the singing pose!

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    Joel, I like your image a lot! I would like to see a bit more contrast on the bird and a crop on the left, bottom and right sides.

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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    The singing pose and composition look good. As mentioned, it could use a bit more sharpening and the perch is a bit overpowering. If it were mine, I might remove the brighter area in the background in the upper right.

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