I took this one today at Drumlin Farm in Lincoln MA.
Over-the-shoulder pose seems the perfect one for this bird
since of the plumage action is on its back. CC appreciated.
I agree about the back view being great here. I like the fine white flowers on the bush.
I would be tempted to crop down from above, about 50% of the free space above the bird. It is an attractive background, but I think the bird will show better if larger in the frame.
What an spectacular setting, very spring like. Over the shoulder works for me, just wish for a bit more detail on the whites of the head. TFS, Ilija :)
This is a very nice image. At first I wanted to take a little off the top but to do that you would really need to got to 6 X 4 aspect ratio to keep it from looking boxy and that would cause you to lose some of the flowers around the bird. Therefore, I would just leave it as is, which is very nice as I said before. Well done.
Good job with the exposure on the blacks, and he really stands out against the foliage. I dont mind the space on top, but would bring in a little from the left.
Beautiful setting and nice pose. Good comp. I'm used to seeing the back of the head as being more buff-yellowish on these guys...you could try experimenting with the sponge tool to selectively saturate this area (soft brush, saturate at 8-10% - repeat if necessary) as there seems to be a bit of colour already showing. I also find there is a bit of a greenish cast on the Bobolink - no doubt caused by the lush surrounding vegetation.
I didn't want to tone down the image too much and lose the detail in the blacks.
I agree however that the greens (midtones) should be darkened.
Danny pretty much nailed the problems with the crop.
I could either crop closely and lose the grass stem on the right,
or include it all. I actually have a version of a tighter crop,
so I agree both are OK IMO.