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    Jay Tan
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    Default Frontal Brahminy Kite

    Another Brahminy Kite from Langkawi island after a dive, got nothing for its efforts though!

    1DM3, 300mm+1.4x, f/8, 1/3200

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    Quite the wingspan, and I like the straight-on flight pose. Perhaps a bit of a crop below to above the pale streak in the water would work well. I also think the greenish spots in the ULC distract a bit and my eyes wanderthat way alot...toning them down some (but not fully eliminate) would be good IMO.

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    Fabs Forns
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    Very nice coming at you pose, agree with the streak in the water being distracting and I would sharpen the face bit more.

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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    Great angle, I also like the dangling feet and droplets. The whites have a slight color cast on my monitor, another vote for more sharpening of the bird.

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    Excellent incoming pose and great advise above
    TFS

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