Hi Tim,
I love the colours in this - you did a great job with those :)
I love the pose but might be tempted to take a slice off the LHS to get rid of some of the OOF-ness.
Best Nicki
Nice close-up of the elusive bird (well, at least in my limited experience with this species). The white neck feathers would have been easy to blow out, but you've got those in check. I like the comp left-to-right as I don't mind the OOF body (giving a great sense of depth to this close-up), but would prefer more room above. I would also selectively sharpen the eye more as it seems a little less sharp than the bill.