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    The jumpers are so small I use a small twig to tickle the surface so I can spot them. Most are curious and come out but this one wasn't going for it.
    Still trying to catch one blinking.
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    Hey Daniel, this has a very cool feel to it, I like the fade from spider into the darkness. The silvery hairs are very cool. Nice details.

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    I agree! I'd darken the ULC so it doesn't pull the eye away from all those OTHER eyes. Maybe bring up the right side just a tiny bit more so it still fades off into darkness but you can see a little more of his face?

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    Great mood of mystery, agree with Jules on darkening the corner since it is distracting.

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    Love the detail here, Daniel. Agree that the ULC is a bit distracting. I didn't know that spiders blink!
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    Looks almost cuddly.
    Really nice focus on the eyes.

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    I always like these "monster coming out of the dark" shots. :)

    I agree that the ULC should be darkened.

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    Another vote for darkening the ULC, great mood created here with the image on black. Good job for HH too.

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    Thanks to all. I have applied your suggestions using nx2


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    Hey Daniel,
    The darkness really adds to the overall mood of the image IMO and I also agree with the ULC brightness. That being said.....I don't know if you have to go entirely black there...loses some of the mood. Went a little less in the repost....let me know your thoughts.

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    I feel all black isn't improving the image. What do you think of this instead?


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    Hey Daniel,
    Toned down is working for me....but did you do anything to the color....looks a bit blue now on the face.....but I am liking that direction!

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    Except for above mentioned ULC spot...I like the original crop and mood

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    It is a nice image, I like the mood and comp. I like Roman's repost.

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