I like the placement of the bird low in the frame. You've got good eye contact and a nice view of the eggs. I think you can get a little more detail out of the blacks. I might consider a slight crop off the top.
nice perspective to get everything in. the eye looks like it might need a little cleaning up next to the catchlight. would make it look sharper. and i think it could go a little brighter too. hope you dont get lambasted like i did for photographing terns on eggs!