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    image thread 5-26-10 in landscapes. (I had been isolated from every connection for 9 days). Just to see whether the PP treatment (in Nikon Picture) has worked. Data: zoom 1 sigma 17-35 f4 1/20 OEV +0,5 mtering medium ap. priority ISO 320 difficult to remind all the passages but certainly: Brightness 50 contrast 25 midtones 20 Exposition +0.19 the sharness is treated in 'contrast mask'.

    Raining!

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    lovely rainy mood here , liked the framing of river here ,
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    valerio, the composition looks great to me and the mood just over the top. there seems to be something a little funky going on at parts of the river edge. bright edges? and the overall image seems soft. were you using a tripod? i think with a little more work, this thing would really shine!!!

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    Hi Valerio.

    Love the composition. Layering effect is effective, woul try having detail in te shadows without turning to much. Btw posting from iPad so not sure about density calibration

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    Hi Valerio, I remember looking at this or something similar. The river acts as a good leading line with the fog adding an element of mood.
    Agree with Harold that there is a whitish border running along the bottom left edge(some on the right) of the river. I don't know where that came from. Would have wanted a bit more detail pulled out of the dark forest area and more contrast in the sky.
    I would remove the reeds and small island on the bottom.
    Finally. I'm wondering if the image might need some CW rotation. Im referring to the mountain on the right...

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    I love the mood and the composition. Whether intentional or not, the softness gives it a vintage quality that is attractive. Bright spots along the river edge and elsewhere are very distracting and could be removed without too much effort.

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    Love the mood and some good advice from those above!!
    Keep em coming :)

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    Thanks to all. es david, more detail on the dark areas. And contrast in the sky. Handlekeeping. the rain was disturbing..

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