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    Default My first orchid 2

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    Model = NIKON D300
    Exposure Time = 1/5"
    F Number = F9
    Exposure Program = Aperture priority
    ISO Speed Ratings = 400
    Exposure Bias Value = -0.33EV
    Metering Mode = Spot
    Flash = Off
    Sensing Method = One-chip color area sensor
    Exposure Mode = Auto exposure
    White Balance = Manual white balance
    Focal Length In 35mm Film = 157mm
    Lens = Nikkor 105mm/F:2,8 VR

    Tripod, natural light from window, levels, contrast ,sharpening.

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    Adrian, another beautiful orchid! I see two very minor ways you could improve on this - lightening up the dark areas of the very top blossom (the one that's leaning a bit away from the light) by a slight levels adjustment and then giving it a bit more room on the bottom so there is more stem to balance out the height of the blossoms. I added a little canvas at the bottom (you can see how much by where your signature moved to) and recropped to a 7x10. I think it gives the orchid a little more presence in the frame this way but it's certainly your choice - just wanted to present it for you to think about.

    You're really doing a great job of getting these flowers all inside the DOF - nice work!

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    Beautiful lighting, tones, and focus. Great DOF as Julie mentioned and I like the extra canvas she added at the bottom.

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    Thank you very much Julie and Allan! The added canvas and stem, really looks good.

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    Roman Kurywczak
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    Hey Adrian,
    Another beauty and Jules tweaks take this up another notch......Very nicely done!

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