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    This is the same Eastern Kingbird from yesterday with a better pose, but no berry.

    Cloned out a stringy feather off the tail and bright spot off the top. Everything else is standard web processing.

    Camera Make: NIKON CORPORATION

    Camera Model: NIKON D2X

    Image Date: 2006:08:22 11:464

    Flash Used: Yes (Strobe light detected)

    Focal Length: 600.0mm (35mm equivalent: 900mm)

    Exposure Time: 0.010 s (1/100)

    Aperture: f/8.0

    ISO equiv: 100

    White Balance: Auto

    Metering Mode: Matrix

    Exposure: aperture priority (semi-auto)

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    Nice color,pose and details,i would clone the brunch on the right side!

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    Very nice Jim I find these images difficult to control because of all the clutter You have managed very well here The one thing I would try changing is the bold green spot lined up with its face !!!!

    Might want to select the bg and blur a bit more I like this image a lot !!!!

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    Thanks Al, I did desaturate the BG just a hair (forgot to mention that) but I will probably take the time to select it and blur it some more and maybe even darken it a bit too.

    Just wanted to see if this pose would fall as flat as the last one first :D

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    Actually I'd crop some of the perch off the bottom, in my opinion, it would place more focus on the bird.

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    Well, Jim--nits have been mentioned--but I do like the perch of little berries. The face seems a bit dark, but could be because of the darker bg behaind it.

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    I like this as well and I do agree a crop from the bottom would emphasize the bird even more.

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    Maybe more like this?

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