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    Multiple detail passes (curves, sharpening, topaz detail 2) and posterized, selective masks & blend modes. (maybe 20 layers total)... loses a little to small jpeg.

    Thanks for looking, commenting.

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    Michael, Very interesting piece. I like the walking pose and sharp details. I do wish for a slight head turn. The raised foot out of the water is killer. It looks like a slight green cast on the bird? I also might evict OOF fish/water drop in front of the beak. Nicely done.:)

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    I agree about the oof light spot under the beak but I find the yellow foot a bit distracting in this image. The work on the feathers is so delicate and interesting but I find my eye constantly drawn to the foot so for me I would rather not have it raised in an image like this. If the photo wasn't made to appear so moody and atmospheric, the foot would have been a winner (IMHO). Love the look of the water and the rest of the bird, beautifully presented.

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    Nice image and application, Michael.

    Removal of the color cast would make this work. I personally agree with Denise :eek: ... sometimes :D ... on the foot. I like it as the lower leg is visible with the dark BG. If it weren't, the leg would not work, IMO.

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    Denise, Hillary, Mark,

    Thanks much for the comments... removed spot, removed yellow cast & took the specular highlights off the foot (there were many) to maybe bring it closer to balance rather than the focal point.



    Thanks again...

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    Michael, I like that much better. It is a really wonderful image. Thank you.

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