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    Malcolm Mackenzie
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    Canon 1Ds MKIII, ISO 250, EF 70-200mm at 145mm, f/11, 1/160, hand held.

    Craters of the Moon National Monument was a little out of my way, but worth the time it took to detour.
    I was fascinated by the shadows created by the late afternoon sun but troubled by how to capture them.
    Your comments and suggestions would be appreciated.

    Thanks for looking.

    Malcolm

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    Robert Amoruso
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    Hi Malcolm,

    I found the image interesting with nice use of sidelight and good exposure. But my eye was looking around for a center of interest and did not find one. I tried a crop (above) and liked the diagonal the rocks in the center of the image made. I also did a reverse s-curve in a Curves adjustment to lower contrast and in a Selective Colot adjustment added 2% black to black and neutral channels to provide a bitr of pop to the image. Also in selective color I subtracted black from cyan and blue color channels to lower the blue cast in the shadows. I like how the large rock in the FG left balances with the rock in the BG right.
    Last edited by Robert Amoruso; 03-02-2008 at 06:50 PM.

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    Malcolm Mackenzie
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    Thank you Rob.
    The whole landscape was like this. I struggled to find a nice clean bottom edge and yet still give some of the scope of size. You make a good suggestion and took the time to work the image and explained your techniques well. Thank you.
    I will continue to work it and try and get it close to yours.

    Cheers.
    Malcolm

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    Robert Amoruso
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    Hi Malcolm,

    I think you picked the right position for the direction of light as the shadows and highlights accenturate the details well and exposure was good and thats a big part of the battle in this type of image. Next is finding that right arrangement of elements that creates a pleasing image and thats the rest of the battle. You are heading in the right direction. When the big picture (think wide-angle) is not working for me, I go for details as you did at 145mm. I cropped it further to limit the images to less details of the rocks to give the viewer a more well-defined selection of elements (shadows/highlights on the snow and the rocks) to lead the eye around the image.

    Keep up the good work.

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    Bret Edge
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    Looks like a foreign landscape. The snow texture is wonderful and the dark/light contrast between snow and rock is very neat. I like the crop of the 2nd version but prefer the color in the 1st one. Nice work!

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