Looks good to me. Very nice composition. Normally I don't like merges of birds, but it works very well here with clear view of both eyes. The raised foot gives a sense of action.
I might be tempted to clone out the band, and since it is such a clean image, would consider cleaning up the gray blob beneath the rear of the left bird.
OP looks fine to me. I don't have a problem seeing a band therefore, my hand is not itchy to clone anything. :D
Well done on a wonderful intimate moment! :)