Nice - like the direct eye contact - wings frame the face nicely - IMHO. Like the BG also - nice 3D Feel.
Closer you are to a subject the faster the SS required to freeze the motion - so if you had wanted to freeze the wings here - would have needed about 1/2500TH - Doable with a increase in ISO.
A slight contrast boost and some additional sharpening is all thats needed - IMHO.