
Originally Posted by
Phil Ertel
Hi Peter,
Great find! I never get enough images of owls. You did well in getting an unobstructed view of the owl. I like this presentation with the owl looking straight down the barrel of the lens.
If this were mine I would make the following post capture adjustment. I think your image has a lot of potential. To demonstrate, I made the following adjustments in photoshop. I hope you don't mind. Remember you're the artist so it is up to you if these suggestions are worth the effort or have merit (hopefully I am not boring you with the detail below).
1. I see a strong green color cast which I assume is due to the green foliage. I used Robert O'Toole's Average Blur Color Balance at 100% to remove the color cast.
2. Did you use flash? I ask because the eye look a bit strange. Anyway I created a layer if just the eye using quick masks and in selective colors add black and remove blue and cyan to make them appear more like I am used to seeing them.
3. I find the brighter stops in the background to be a little distracting. So I added a blank layer about the background layer, change the mode to color, using the eyedropper I selected a darker green and then painted on the color layer to change the brighter stops to green.
4. The background greens seemed a bit bright for my personal preference so desaturated the greens by adding a Hue/Saturation layer and and subtracted 18% saturation from the green. I did this in an attempt to make the bird standout more.
5. I also selectively sharpen the face.
6. This is more of a question/observation. I see some noise in the feathers; especially in the feathers below the perch. Was the image originally under exposed and lightened a fair amount when you processed it? I would suggest running some noise reduction on the master file to see if you can clean the noise up with out loosing the detail.
Thanks for sharing.