I like this presentation as I find the composition pleasing. The subject looking back into the frame presents the bird nicely. I like the simple background and the shades of green as I think they compliment the bird. I see good details that appear sharp.
If this were mine I would make three adjustments based on my personal taste.
1) the white on the bird look a little gray to me. I would selectively lighten them a little.
2) The reds are not that bad but, they do seem a bit bright to me and are clipped just a litte. I would desaturate them just enough to bring the spike off the right axis.
3) The shine/highlight in the eye seems too large. If you so inclined, I would reduce the highlight.
I like a lot, it looks good on my laptop, hard to tell so much detail. The reflection on the eye is the horizon line, not sure what you can do about that without going into major surgery. Thanks for sharing.
Looks good but tons of room for post processing improvement :) Among other things: Eye Doctor work, lightened whites on bird with Color Range Selection and Selective Color adj. Added CYAN to the REDs to tone them down. Worked on the bill and the tip of the perch--mostly with the Patch Tool. Lightened the whole image. All as per Digital Basics :) Most as per Phil's suggestions :)
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