Hi Monte. I saw a bunch of these guys up at Lake Erie a couple of weeks ago. I like the pose and your composition, but agree that HA could be better. It looks like there is some noise on the birds and in the BG.
Looks like a good perch for a feed. Not much light with 1/100s @ ISO 2000. Bird on the right looks sharp but the left has just dropped out of the DOF. Agree on the noise - is a this a big crop or is it related to the ISO or maybe underexposure with opening up in post?