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    This is a full frame shot. I would like to have some suggestions in how to crop, and edit this shot.
    The blown out leaves in the BG, used burn tool but so obvious and did a poor job.
    Let me know what you think, and you are welcome post your version.

    Thank you in advance.



    Exposure: 0.01 sec (1/100)
    Aperture: f/4.0
    Focal Length: 200 mm
    ISO Speed: 800
    Exposure Bias: 0 EV
    Flash: No Flash

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    Hi Troy - Id post the original without the changes to the leaves in the BG.
    :)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lance Peters View Post
    Hi Troy - Id post the original without the changes to the leaves in the BG.
    :)
    Here you go, Lance.


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    Hi Troy, the only advice I could give on this image is a VERY tight crop on the fawn. There are so many distractions it's hard for me to figure out anything else out...
    I'm afraid the crop would be so tight you would lose 80-85% of the image

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    I might crop this to move the fawn away from the center, but I do like the hide and seek look in this one. As for the blown leave, might consider cloning it out if your ethic allow it.

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    Hi Troy Best option is Dave's going real tight .. for keeping as a record shot which I would, can fill in the bright areas then crop some of the top, lighten the animals face, darken nose and enjoy :)

    I have lots of these with a special meaning for me and enjoy keeping !!

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    Thanks Al and everyone's suggestions.
    How about this version?


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