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    rickotto
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    Thanks,

    Rick

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    Hi, welcome!!!!!! I like the idea of your post. A modern, clean view of often seen landscape. I think there is a bit too much sky, though. Perhaps a crop to make each layer more uniform?

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    Hi Rick,
    Well exposed along with pleasing layers.
    I also feel you should crop about half the sky since it's not adding much to the image.
    You have 2 interesting subjects in the distance but I don't feel they work well together. Would have liked to have seen only one or the other. I also feel the image would be alot stronger if I could see more of the subject rather then being so tiny within the image...

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    Lance Warley
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    Welcome, Rick :)

    The water texture is excellent and the reflection adds drama. As mentioned above, I would consider going with less sky.

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    Roman Kurywczak
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    Hi Rick,
    Welcome to the forum! I can't add much to the above comments as I agree with them. I do like the lonely feel the image conveys though. Looking forward to more images!

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