Nice composition, Barbara. I really like the sketched look you achieved. I think this might look even better with a totally clean BG behind the flower. Well done.
I like the COMP and the sketch look. I feel that either the brown outlined things (???) need to be lightened and softened or the flower needs to be saturated and darkened a bit as the two do not make sense to my brain as presented. Agree with ix-naying the BKGR.
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Thanks for the feedback everyone. This was a pink lilly with very dark stamen and this was a first attempt at a sketch look. The image had some mild texture applied and I should have tried this experiment on the image w/o the texture perhaps. :)