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    Canon 50D, 1/500, f8, ISO400, 300mm+2xTC
    Crop for composition, NR, increased saturation and sharpen a little.

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    The white looks a little bit over. I think you could crop this tighter...I don't think for this one you need to show so much of the perch.

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    Hi John - you have captured the colours and the sheen quite nicely - whites do look a little hot - agree with desmond would crop tighter removing the lower branch entirely - does not add anything to the picture and will put the focus onto your subject.
    Good HA and eye contact and like the over the shoulder look.
    Good show :)

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    Hi John Agree on all points Biggest change would be the branch, big branches can overpower the little guys !!!

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    Hi John, All good points made above. The backround is great but agree on cropping to make the bird more dominant...

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