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    I like this wing position.
    As always, critiques and comments are welcome!

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    Exposure: 0.001 sec (1/1600)
    Aperture: f/5.6
    Focal Length: 270 mm
    ISO Speed: 640
    Exposure Bias: 0 EV
    Flash: No Flash

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    Troy, what was the rig?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jeff Cashdollar View Post
    Troy, what was the rig?
    Jeff,

    D700 +200-400 f/4, handholding. Was in the salt water for about 2 hours.

    Troy

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    Nice, and at 270MM close and beautiful. I too like the wing position and the soft muted sky is a plus. Very clean putting focus on subject - strong BIF picture - congrats.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jeff Cashdollar View Post
    Nice, and at 270MM close and beautiful. I too like the wing position and the soft muted sky is a plus. Very clean putting focus on subject - strong BIF picture - congrats.
    Thank you Jeff. The overcast sky plus wind helped me that day. Thank you.

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    Hi Troy ...salt water is good for your feet :)

    Also like the wing position and pretty bg with a few clouds ... bird is also looking your way !!! Would like to see the bird a little lighter particularly around the head area. Could just do a general curves adjustment then select the head !! Excellent and like it a lot !!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Alfred Forns View Post
    Hi Troy ...salt water is good for your feet :)

    Also like the wing position and pretty bg with a few clouds ... bird is also looking your way !!! Would like to see the bird a little lighter particularly around the head area. Could just do a general curves adjustment then select the head !! Excellent and like it a lot !!
    Al, will do. Thank you for the suggestions.

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    Just lighten the head area and some on the body Not a big difference but every bit helps !!

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    Hi Troy, I like the image. Wing position,placement in the frame etc.As stated above I thought the image needed brightening. I used a levels adj and lightly dodged the head...
    I also upped the sat about 8 pts...not much...

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    Hi Dave Do like the bump in saturation, might go a little less looks like a young bird !! ... this image is getting better and better Sweet !!!.. and started looking good !!!

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    Like the repost options, image did need lighter face and the sat punch looks good as well. Image was good to start with but the post efforts are nice.

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    Thanks Dave and AL.
    I often have trouble deciding using Curve, Level or Dodge to lighten. Will fix it tonight. Thank you.

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    the reposts are great! a couple options to choose from. i love these birds and the clouds in the bg really help make this one. not the boring blue sky.

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    Quote Originally Posted by harold davis View Post
    the reposts are great! a couple options to choose from. i love these birds and the clouds in the bg really help make this one. not the boring blue sky.
    Thank you.

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