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    Got the full body, but decided to crop it this way due to some leaves got in the foreground.
    The sticks on the bottom of the body were brighter, used burn tool to darken it.
    Comments and critiques are always welcome.

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    Camera: Nikon D700
    Exposure: 0.001 sec (1/1600)
    Aperture: f/4.0
    Focal Length: 400 mm
    ISO Speed: 200
    Exposure Bias: +1/3 EV
    Flash: No Flash

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    Technical side looks good, but I'm not sure about the composition. Then again, I always find cropping birds hard to do ;)
    Last edited by Desmond Chan; 05-01-2010 at 04:20 AM.

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    Hi Troy, I like the head angle and droplet falling off the spoon.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Desmond Chan View Post
    Technical side looks good, but I'm not sure about the composition. Then again, I always find cropping birds hard to do ;)
    Desmond, me too.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Roberto Betta View Post
    Hi Troy, I like the head angle and droplet falling off the spoon.
    Thank you Roberto.

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    ha very good congrats

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    Hi Troy, nice HA, sharp eye and "spoon." I find the dark blotches in the BG distracting; you may consider lightening them.

    Some day I hope to have a good image of a spoonie, so I envy you. The one that I see at Wako has not cooperated with me yet.

    Ricardo

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    Hi Troy

    Like it a lot, particularly the sweet look !! ... and do like the crop !!

    btw regarding the dark spots Ricardo is mentioning he has a point but would solve in a different manner .... would darknen the light ones so the bg is more even .... darks won't be noticeable !!! Like it a lot Troy !!!

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    Hi Troy, cracking feather detail, gorgeous colours and the whites have been handled well. For me I might crop a little off the lhs, this for me would emphasis the head turn & great bill.

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    Thank you Stuart, Ricardo, Al and Steve.

    As for BG, I would probably darken the white spots. It will give it a bit contrast.
    Steve, lhs means left hand side?

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    Yep, as a guide, the height from the head to the edge of the image above is say 15mm, then 15mm from bill to the edge of the left hand side as an example. Might work?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Steve Kaluski View Post
    Yep, as a guide, the height from the head to the edge of the image above is say 15mm, then 15mm from bill to the edge of the left hand side as an example. Might work?

    Steve
    Steve, you are welcome to crop any of my shots, and post it here. Plus, it is easier to see the results than describing it. :p

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    Here you go Troy, BTW just quickly removed the branches too. :)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Steve Kaluski View Post
    Here you go Troy, BTW just quickly removed the branches too. :)
    I like it. Now, how did you remove the branch? ;)

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    Troy, can't give you all the secrets in one go. Save that for next time. :D

    Steve

    PS Check out this thread, might be of use, but don't get hung up about it.
    http://www.birdphotographers.net/for...ad.php?t=52894
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    Quote Originally Posted by Steve Kaluski View Post
    Troy, can't give you all the secrets in one go. Save that for next time. :D

    Steve

    PS Check out this thread, might be of use, but don't get hung up about it.
    http://www.birdphotographers.net/for...ad.php?t=52894
    Don't tell me it is the CS5.

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    No, CS2, CS3, CS4...;)

    Next tutorial Troy. :)
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