Three's Company

[Don Hamilton Jr.]

Fort Desoto, first attempt at multiple subjects. Very Early am. Port. crop only.
Thks for CC.
Canon 500mm
IS0 640
F29
1/160
Eval metering +.33

[Lance Peters]

HI Don - No Image.

[Bob Decker]

Theres some nice detail in the featers. The crop isn't working for me... too centered. I think there needs to be some more space on the right hand side.

[Don Hamilton Jr.]

Bob, thks for the CC, here's another attempt.
Don

[Dave Mills]

Hi Don, interesting grouping. The repost is an improvement but I would also take some off the top.

[Lance Peters]

Hi Don - doesn't quite work for me - perhaps a lower shooting angle and offset to the side a little, can make for strong images - as is the 2nd bird has the illusion of floating in space due to the legs not being visible.
Expsoure looks good and is sharp.
Keep em coming ;)

[Tom Graham]

Yeah, like Lance suggests, off some to the left so birds are staggered, not stacked.
Technicals look good to me.
Tom

[Alfred Forns]

Hi Don Agree with comments and can add for triples like this one you need symmetry, works a lot better with repeating poses !!! Neat !!!