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    I took this picture recently of an over-flying Red-tailed hawk, which I thought was quite reasonable in terms of the bird - wing angle, detail etc., but the sky was a uniform dull gray and looked boring. So I adjusted it in PS Elements using the Render-Clouds filter, to make it more interesting-looking. I hope that's a legit. thing to do.

    Nikon D70s, 300 F/4 AF-S + 1.4X TC, 1/2500. f/6.3, ISO 500, hand-held

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    Richard

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    Hi Richard. The hawk looks, maybe a little selectice sharpening of the head area. The cloud rendering is good but maybe about 50% less. I would try a vertical crop on this leaving less space behind the bird.
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    Hi Richard, Nice wing position and the cloud rendering appearing natural. Agree about cropping some off the back and wished for a better light angle...

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    The clouds look good to me; I'll have to try that filter sometime. Agree that moving the bird somewhat further left in the frame would help -- maybe crop a bunch on the left and a bit top and bottom? Perhaps brightening the eye, and maybe the face, would help alleviate the marginal lighting conditions.

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    Hi Richard - all good advice above - A little work on the eye will improve it.
    Do like the wing position, might have used a little more DOF as there was nothing in the BG to worry about - but would not have wanted to trade too much shutter speed - not sure if the D70S can be pushed much highere in terms of ISO??
    Keep em coming :)

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    Alfred Forns
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    Great comments and Peter nailed all of his points !!! Sweet !!!

    The cloud work looks natural and I see nothing wrong with it !! When you sharpen be careful with halos around the bird ...easy to create !!

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