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    50D, ISO 400, 1/1250, f7.1, 300mm+2xTC, HH
    Slight crop for composition, NR.

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    Hi John, Love the low angle along with the subjects positioning. If inclined I might blend the backround on the far right. I would also take a bit off the bottom. Overall...well handled!

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    Hi john!....Nice capture....I agree with Dave....take some off the bottom and if it were mine i would crop some off the LHS so your subject is off center. I like the colored background but the RHS needs to be blended as Dave suggested

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    agree with the other guys really, blend on the right and crop off bottom abit to tighten slightly

    Love the capture tho, wish mine all turned out like that!

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    I love the low angle and bokeh both front and back.

    I actually like the proportion of your crop left to right and would only consider making it 10-20% tighter, but with the same placement and proportions.

    Dave

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    Really nice, John. I like your composition as is and agree with the blending in urc.
    Great low angle, BG and pose. Killdeers have great eyes!
    Peter

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    Hi John - agree with the above comments - like the low shooting angle - just a little too much negative space with OOF elements on the bottom.
    Keep em coming :)

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    Sweet image John Great feel !! Agree with comments and can add would like seeing a little more shadow detail around the neck band !!! Big Congrats on this one !!!

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    The low angle and the bird partly obscured by the oof grass makes for a very nice composition.

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