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    These guys are exp nightmare, especially with strong light.
    They are easy to get close to them though, quite cooperative.
    CC appreciated.

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    Ilija, I like the pose and the head angle. I like the shine on the blue feathers but might tone down some of brighter parts of the bird and perch. Great getting the nice soft colors in the BG to compliment the bird.

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    Thank you Denise, I already darkened the whites, I guess a bit more is due.
    I'm glad you like the shine on the plumage. I wasn't really sure myself
    about it, really tough little guys to get them right on bright light.

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    Good HA Ilija, and well placed in the frame. I also like the soft pastel colours of the BG.

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    When you say exposure nightmare, you are not kidding. In my opinion these birds are amongst the toughest species to properly expose, along with Buffleheads and Wood Ducks. I agree with Denise that the white's look slightly bright, but they are pretty close to reality in my opinion. I also agree that the shine is great, and would darken the perch a bit. Great shot!

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    Beautiful Bhai, Nice expo, details, HA and compo...

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    Advice:
    1- get up earlier
    2-tape a nice branch to the post as a more attractive perch
    3- for the image as is, try a reverse S-curve. THe whites in some places are already graying out and looking funky...

    I do like the head angle. Lastly: there are no exposure nightmares with digital... :)
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arthur Morris View Post
    Advice:
    1- get up earlier
    2-tape a nice branch to the post as a more attractive perch
    3- for the image as is, try a reverse S-curve. THe whites in some places are already graying out and looking funky...

    I do like the head angle. Lastly: there are no exposure nightmares with digital... :)
    Thank you for the advice, as always, very much appreciated.

    1- get up earlier
    Couldn't agree more:)

    2-tape a nice branch to the post as a more attractive perch
    Will do, the place is perfect for set-ups

    3- for the image as is, try a reverse S-curve. THe whites in some places are already graying out and looking funky...
    Hm, didn't think about that. Will try to select the white and do the reverse S on the selection.

    Thank you again,

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    You are most welcome. I appreciate students who have an open mind and really want to improve. :)
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