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    Default Desert Vista

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    Nikon D-200
    1/100 sec at f22
    12-24 mm tokina lense at 24 mm
    ISO 200

    Took this in Namiba...all comments welcome!

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    Hey Bob,
    You did pretty good getting seperation in the tree although I wish the RH branch wasn't merging as much with the dune but not sure if you could have gotten more.....now out of your control is all the footprints....not my favorite but nothing you could do with them. I like where you placed the dunes and progression towards the tree....so nicely composed overall!

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    Hi Bob, Agree with Roman's comments. I feel you did the best you could compositionally weighing all the factors at hand. This place looks like it could be magical either very early or late in the day....

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    Ditto all the above comment$ you did well with what you had

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    nice scene and I echo the comments above - considered a slight rotation? I know the dune-line moves into the image but it still feels a bit skewed to the left
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    Hi Bob
    I know Namibia, Personally I 'd prefer if you have waited a bit, as the sunlight is evidently high, to obtain a bit more shadows. Good the composition and the lines of the dunes.

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    I thank everyone for their comments

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    Real nice composition. I wish the entire shadow was included in the right side.

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    Nice composition and since I'm a fan of dead wood it really sparks my interest

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