Hey Christopher,
I too would probably prefer more DOF but for me that isn't the main issue.....in the LLC the oof triangle is the most distracting and the falloff in the MG right.....you could possibly rotate and crop.......but let's see what others chime in.
Hey Chris, I like it as it is, the DOF looks fine, and would agree with Roman on the lower left triangle, but not sure if you could clone in some petal lines there.
I also thought of cloning the petal lines; another option would be to set a blend mode to screen to lighten that area up and then mask back in the rest of the area so it's back to where it is now.
I'd also clone out the little gray spot at the top center of the frame.
Beautiful flower these little ones are and you did a very nice job capturing it.
Thanks Cheryl, Roman, Mike, and Jules. Much appreciated. The shallow DOF was deliberate, though I agree that it would have been better with all the stigmas in focus. I tried lightening the OOF triangle in the LLC as suggested and cloned out the spot mentioned by Jules. Please let me know what you think.