A very cool action shot, well done.
Nice BG, the poses look good to. But it would maybe be better if they were some more room
between the two swallows.
Keep them coming.
Nice interaction, only wish that the head of the lower one was slightly turned up and toward the upper one. Vertical comp works ok for me but I think a horizontal would as well.
Troy: The birds' poses are such that in landscape crop I probably would end up with
a more sqare crop, not bad but I prefer not to center the subject in the frame.
In any case there are several possibilities here.