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    Default Hiding in plain sight

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    This Barred Owlet, its sibling, and parent were in the oaks near their nest. Technicals are not so great, but I like the curious youngster's pose and the oak flowers framing the head. Cropped for composition. Really needed a tripod, 400 or 500mm lens, and flash fill on this one. Lake Lotus Park, Altamonte Springs, FL.

    Camera Model Name : NIKON D300
    Software : Adobe Photoshop CS4 Windows
    Modify Date : 2010:04:04 12:45:48
    Copyright : David Gancarz
    Exposure Program : Aperture-priority AE
    ISO : 200
    Date/Time Original : 2010:04:04 09:25:16
    Shutter Speed Value : 1/400
    Aperture Value : 5.6
    Exposure Compensation : 0
    Max Aperture Value : 5.7
    Metering Mode : Multi-segment
    Light Source : Unknown
    Flash : No Flash
    Focal Length : 300.0 mm
    Nikkor 70-300mm VR

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    Lance Peters
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    Hi David - A little fill flash might have helped here.
    As presented the owl is to dark - could try lightening him a little and lightening the eye might also help - he is just getting a bit lost up there.
    Do like the pose - but the steep angle is working against you here.
    TFS

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    Hi David....I agree completely with Lance. You need to simplify...perhaps cropping out much of the bottom of the image would help...it doesn't contribute anything to the subject. Looking forward to your next post!

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    Hi David, you caught a great moment here and agree it needs some FF and a lot tighter framing around the subject. That would have created an entirely different look to the image and accentuated the subject...

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    Peter Farrell
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    ...but a really cool pose.
    Peter

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    Alfred Forns
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    Agree with comments and can add you should increase the ISO You camera performs well !!

    PS wise you could lighten the bird a bit, it is a cute pose and a keeper in my book !!

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