
Originally Posted by
Phil Ertel
Hi Peter, I like this. The bird appears well exposed with sharp details. I like the head angle and the catch-light in the eye. I like the contrast of the light background and the dark raven. If you darken the background don't be too heavy handed. Another composition option I offer (purely personal preference) is cropping some off the bottom. I am having a hard time explaining so I have attached my suggestion (sorry about cutting off your name). Again just a suggestion as I think your presentation also works. Thanks for sharing.