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    Hi Guys,

    Still in my collection of bird in studio, I put a dark plastic mat background, I select the plant, the flash is placed on the lower front corner on the left and the bird pose..

    So Mark III, Lens canon 28-85, flash 580 Ex, tripod, and patience.
    speed: 400
    f: 16
    ISO 320

    Let me know what do you thing that I can do better with this montage. The pictures is uncrop.




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    Wow. A 28-28? !!! Can you please tell me more about what a bird in studio is?

    This bird is simply gorgeous. To my eyes, the flash is well executed here.
    Slightly tight for me, I would like some more space in the bottom and sides perhaps.
    I see some artifacts below the leaves in LLC.

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    wide angle bird photography. i guess that's the next big thing. the bird seems a little oversharpened and i might darken the pupil. i could take or leave adding some canvas all around.

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    Beautiful bird. Agree with Harold on a little oversharpened. Might also run a little NR on the BG. Something looks a bit odd on the leaf to the right of his right foot.

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    Beautiful bird and your studio technique has improved a lot lately. You could make a little bigger studio to give some room to the bigger species.

    I also see some artifacts bellow the bird. I don't know what it can be, but you should look at the original RAW. I agree with sharpening a little less.

    Well done, Manuel.

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    Hi Guys thanks for your comments.
    the studio is a square box of 60 x 60 cm, that I have with me during my banding work throught he country, so I can get the bird without fingers, and well sharp and clean.
    The small weird thing on the left side of the pictures, I have try to remove a leaves but I am not a champion with Photoshop, so it looks like weird.
    Thanks about sharpness.
    All the best
    Manuel

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