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    This Is Our Morning

    Speaking softly, sighing, knowing,
    Understanding overflowing
    In my ear sweet words you utter
    While the candles softly flutter

    Your gentle touch, my hands in yours
    Opens up those unseen doors
    Of sharing dreams and painful scars,
    Embracing underneath the stars

    I want you so, my love divine
    For when we kiss, our hearts align.
    And when you said you’d take that chance
    You bade my simple heart to dance

    I look ahead, on down the road
    And see our picturesque abode
    A garden bathed in morning dew
    Budding life, fresh and new

    Come to me, I’ll take your hand
    We’ll walk across this fertile land
    I want to share my life with you
    For when we dream, it all comes true

    Understanding, feeling, showing
    Each day for you my love is growing

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    If she didn't say yes - I WILL!!! :D:):D Whew...that was...whew! ;)

    That second stanza slung an arrow right through my heart. Brilliantly put, Hank.

    Hank. HANK. Who knew someone named HANK could write like that? It was delicious!

    I'm off to go slap a little cold water on my face...

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    Simply beautiful Hank, Very nice image to go along with the soothing words.:)

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    Thanks! I wrote that one for my wife (and yes, she DID say yes). I felt the flower petal detail fit the spirit of the poem. Thanks very much for reading....
    Last edited by Hank Christensen; 04-02-2010 at 04:04 PM.

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    First I need to stop howling about Jules' reply. LMAO. Getting back up off the floor now.

    So evocative, Hank. Your words paint beautiful pictures. The rhymes are terrific and so natural. Rather than focus attention on themselves, they enhance the message. Not an easy thing to do, and you do it so gracefully.

    Wonderful piece of art, Hank.

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