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    Default Western Flycatcher

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    Taken in shade
    Nikon D200 600 mm
    F5.6 SS 1/640
    0 EV ISO 320
    Flash 0 EV TTL-BL probably only partial flash

    Are the yellows too saturated? on the histogram they are not
    suggestions welcome.
    Thanks for looking
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    Hi Ray I like the bird placement with the extra room to the left, was thinking a little tighter but would alter the way the perch comes in and I like it the way it is. Bg is complementing and makes the birds stand out well, would desaturate the yellow just a tad .. but not much it is close.... great looking perch !!

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    Nice comp Ray! I do think that the yellows are too saturated though, for this species (Western Kingbird). Might be a little oversharpened also but I'm viewing on my laptop.

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    Hi Ray - lovely perch - agree with the above comments - also looks a tad over sharpened to me.
    As mentioned a little desat on the yellows - great bg.
    Good Show:)

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    Very nice image, Ray. I like the pose, perch and Bg. Beautiful Bird.
    TFS, Peter

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    Lovely shot..I like how the perch colors complement the yellow on the bird itself. Wonderful Bg! I vote for taking just a bit of sat out of the yellows...not much! Big Congrats!

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    Ray, what a pretty bird! Can't comment on the yellow as I have never seen this bird. I love the composition and yes, the perch does complement the bird very well! Could be a tad over-sharpened.
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    Thanks to everyone for your suggestions and comments.
    Very helpful
    I agree yellow oversaturated.
    Ray

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    nice perch and BG, nice details too. Sat. is easy to fix, TFS
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