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    nikon f 300 iso 400
    m 1/1250@ 6.3
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    A gorgeous foto, maybe just maybe a bit oversaturated.

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    It is oversaturated but it is still very nice, especially the landing pose is.

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    Very nice; would like to see a bit more canvas at the top of the image. Good tonal dynamics and contrast. Maybe soften the BG a bit more. Well done. ;)

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    reposted with less saturation?

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    I like it better with more saturation as in the first image.
    This is an awesome shot with a fantastic wing pose. The open bill is great, too!

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    Tight in the frame, repost's colors look better.
    Remember this is not a one way street, and as a courtesy to your fellow posters, if you ask for critique, take the time to offer some.
    Thanks for sharing.

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    tight as mentioned and i would go somewhere in between on the saturation.

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    Stunning pose. I like the repost better. I agree it is a bit tight. Wish it were mine though!;)

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    I like the report better too. That is more natural.

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    I love the pose and the open bill in this image and I prefer the saturation in the repost. I agree with FAbs about the tight frame.

    Did you crop this from a portrait or landscape format full frame? If it was the latter I would try to add some canvas to the top and bottom sides.

    All that being said I wish that this was in my collection.

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