
Originally Posted by
Phil Ertel
Hi Myer, I like the head angle and resulting eye contact. The diagonal that the bill introduces to the image is pleasing. As presented I would lighten the image and increase the saturation a little to bring out more of the colors. I think you can recover some of the details in the dark areas of the breast and might be worth the effort. You may have already explored alternative compositions, if not may I suggest considering a vertical that emphasizes the head and bill (cropping up to just behind the head and up to the bill). Something to consider and just a suggestion based on personal taste. Thanks for sharing.