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    Brad Newby
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    Default Juried Show Entry 1

    I was accepted into two juried shows recently. First time. I have to commit to print soon so I'd appreciate any suggestions. This GBH was intently walking on a ledge. The back ground was in shadow: dark but mottled so I did darken that in PS. Canon 7D with L100-400 at 400, 1/350 at f6.3 on tripod.

    I especially like the negative space and I think the slope of the wall gives the photo tension.


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    Matthew Gaige
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    Compared to many here I am not experienced, but would like to offer my view.

    I like the space and the image idea. I would be happy with it. After looking closer I thought the edges around the head were somewhat too sharp such as under the bill. It looks processed a little. I would think the editing would not be easy since the bird is mostly back-lite leaving high contrast edges. But all of this could simply be because of the size of the image I see here.

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    Fabs Forns
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    It does look oversharpened on this version, I'm sure in the big one the printer will take care of that :)
    I think the temperature is a little too cool, warming it up a bit would help.

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    Brad Newby
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    As you can imagine, the mask was extremely tedious but I felt it had to be done. It looks much more natural printed at 13x16.

    I am going to try to warm it up a bit. The lighting was a bit harsh and washed out some of the color.

    Thank you

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