Hi Jeff Love this pose It is sort of comical .....perfect tittle !!! I like the sharp prominent eyes but the oof body detracts from the image You are using a camera with very clean ISO would suggest to crank it up for more dof
Might be a good idea varying your dof for the next close encounter Examine later and will be able to judge what are you going to get If shooting wide open the image you see in your screen is basically what will be seen later Same dof So if it looks odd just stop down Love that bg Very complementing
I see what you were trying to do here, emphasize the eyes, but in my opinion, that doesn't work as well in a full body portrait, it may have worked much better in a head only image.