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    Default Remnant of october




    350D, canon 70-200/4 @ 70mm, iso100, ss 1/320, f:8, ACR&PS


    All critics and comments welcome! Thanks!
    Last edited by MIHAIL OBADA; 03-21-2010 at 02:36 AM.

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    Hi Mihal,
    I think the 2 out of focus stems that are intertwined are hurting this. While I am OK with the DOF falloff.....the 2 almost merging seed heads and clipped stem are too distracting. Was there any possible way to get seperation in them?

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    Hi Mihail, Roman brought up a good point. Without the OOF backround stems the image would be cleaner and therefore stronger...

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    Hi Roman, thanks for looking and comments!
    I believe that the two strains give the image more depth and feeling "old", "past", "outdated", (including that they are blurred) time suggested by the title itself. Course, they can very easily be extracted (even before hitting the shutter but the editor).
    In my opinion the main elements are the first branch and spider web threads. Anyway, there are fixed eyes look. At least I think so.

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    Ah, Dave, sorry, we intersected. Thanks for commment!
    I also agree with Roman's opinion and will try this option.

    *For both: Excuse my horrible English!
    Last edited by MIHAIL OBADA; 03-22-2010 at 09:38 AM.

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    Hi Mihail, I think your english is fine!

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    Mihail,

    I am in agreement with Roman and Dave.

    BTW, I understand you just fine.

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    Thanks Robert!

    * Was afraid that I do not fully understand.

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