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    Default Fractalius Owl (Updated with new version!)

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    Looking down at me.

    This is a mama owl, perched in a tree at my brother's house. She was about 12-15 feet high, and I was maybe the same distance away. She's apparently quite tame, and will pose for a long time as long as there are no sudden movements or sharp sounds.



    I like this particular Fractalius setting; it almost looks like a pen and ink drawing.

    I do wish my photoshop skills were better for what are unfortunately obvious reasons to those who know what I'm talking about. Still, practice makes perfect :)

    Here's a link to the original image.
    Last edited by Mike Rodriquez; 03-21-2010 at 04:56 PM.

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    Mike, Big welcome to OOTB! Really nice first post and I like the fractalius effect. I might tone down the whites just a bit. I wish the BG wasn't as busy. Still a nice capture.:)

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    Welcome, Mike. Love Mama Owl! Nice fract work. Like denise I find the BG a bit busy. Also find the blue a little bright for the delicate tones of the rest of the image. But hey, very well done!:) Kora

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    hey, mike. welcome to OOTB!! i like the work here. i dumped it into Ps and tried a B&W version of this. it works really well!!!!!! really smoothed out the bg that way. i might only lighten the eyes just a little bit. nice job!!

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    Mike, Screech Owl's are perfect for this look...they always look a bit scruffy nice effect, you should try some of the above suggestions they'd really help..

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    Agree with others on bg. The only thing I might try to do is lighten the eyes.

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    Thanks for all the feedback. I'll post a new topic with an updated version of this image once my 24 hours is up :)

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    Mike you don't have to wait for the 24 hours, Just reply to your own thread with the rework, you are not starting a new thread.

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    Here's my latest version of Fractalius Owl.

    I used the Topaz ReMask 2 Photoshop plugin to extract the owl and eliminate the background. I wasn't sure what to for a background, so I tried a light solid color.

    I also created a copy of the eyes from the original version, and blended them in; I think it works pretty well. (Thanks to Denise Ippolito for the idea; she used it to great effect on an image of a fox.)

    Thanks again for all of the great feedback!

    Here's a link to the 2 images side-by-side.
    Last edited by Mike Rodriquez; 03-21-2010 at 04:48 PM. Reason: add link to side-by-side image; updated to give credit to DI

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    Like the repost Mike and the loose look of the frac work. Good PP'g.

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    I agree - great job on the repost.

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    Really great job on the repost, Mike. Way to go!:)

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    Mike, welcome to OOTB and a great image:) The repost is really nice.
    Well done.
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    The repost is a real improvement. I like it as it is, but think it could be improved if you could lighten the more saturated yellow fringing. Clean extractions are always tough. Nice work with this one.

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