Song Sparrow

[joshua LaCelle]

Here is a bigger picture cleaned up a bit:



7D, 400 f/5.6 L, 1/1000, f/5.6, ISO-400

[Steve Canuel]

Cute bird giving you a nice angle. I liked the raised up tail. I'd take a little more off the bottom (getting rid of the OOF stuff). I'd also lighten/remove the darker spot by the 2010 up top. The dark spot and the tail pointing up that way leads the eye away from the bird. Also, people here like bigger posts. Easier to critique.

[Josiah LaCelle]

I like the pose and the raised tail on this one. I agree with Steves comments. As Steve said a bigger picture really helps in the critique.

[joshua LaCelle]

I uploaded a larger photo, see my first post.