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    James Boland
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    James Shadle knows how to position people for bird photography opportunities. This spoon bill flew over us on his pontoon boat late on a recent Sunday afternoon. Good thing the boat's steering cables were broken or we would have missed the opportunity.

    Canon EOS 50D
    Canon 100-400mm lens at 220mm
    Manual mode
    ISO: 400
    Aperture: 8
    Shutter: 1/1600

    Post production included NIK Color Efex Pro polarization and tonal contrast.

    Jim

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    Hi James, While I like the unique wing position there are several problems: 1-the image is over-saturated, both the pinks and the sky that is also too dark. 2-the uneven light is problematic at best: there are ways to reduce the problem including lightening the dark areas and darkening the brighter areas and also using a reverse S-curve. I think that by starting from scratch you could improve this one a lot.

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    James;

    Arite hit the high points in his critique, but the eye does not look sharp at all to me. I think the plane of focus was anterior to the eye, as the tip of the bill is pretty sharp, as is the torso.

    James is great.

    Cheers

    Randy

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    I went back to the base image and made sure no additional saturation made its way into the image. I isolated the bird and adjusted the curves as suggested. The sunlight on the small portion of the wing is a challenge. Randy was correct about the eye. My solution was to take an eye from another spoonbill. The adjusted image is the result.

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