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    Default Skimmer in White

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    This image was taken last year at Merritt Island NWR of a Skimmer, skimming.

    Modifications in PS4 included; Conversion to B&W, Poster Edge, Hue & Saturation adjustment and Brightness & Contrast adjustment.

    Enjoy!

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    Mark, Nice composition and effects. I'm wondering if a tiny bit more contrast would work. Nicely framed.

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    Very nice composition, Mark. I like all the negative space and the placement of the bird. I might add a little more room on top and take off a little on the bottom. Agree with Denise that a little more contrast might be nice too.
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    You have a great eye for minimalism (as well as abstract). Agree with the others about a little more contrast. Especially against the strong black border. Kora

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    Nice image Mark, you do have an eye for these types of images, enjoy seeing them...would also like to see it a bit darker/contrast

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    Thanks all for viewing and comments. Appreciate it.

    Attached is an attempt at a darker image. I was having trouble getting contrast without a great darkening of the BG which bothered me. I think I sovled the problem though. Hopefully, it comes through as I see it here. :eek: ;)

    As for placement of the subject Christopher, that is intentional. While it could be centered vertically, I prefer the 1/3 placement for this image. However, I appreciate your comment, it is an alternate vision.

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    Oh I do like this better, Mark. A standout! And to me the placement is perfect. It takes the eye on a journey.:) Kora

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    Repost looks great, Mark. Added contrast did the trick. :)
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    Thanks for reviewing. Appreciate it.

    The added contrast for some reason was a real bummer for this image. The one posted today was similar and took a lot of work to get what is there. But ... makes for interesting images! :eek: ;)

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    Like the repost a lot Mark. I do feel that the wings get a bit close to the inner frame and might want to expand that border, but as you say... :)
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